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Sun Sep 20, 2009, 10:50 PM
with Pablo Naruda...

my heart and head and words are all aflutter and amazed at his mastery, and imagery..

every poem i want to post. every line i want to burn into my skull so i never forget it. i have found few poets that ever truly evoke this in me. very few .. he has.. i am... awestruck.. wondered and speechless.....

this is how i wish my poetry sounded...this is what i wish i could achieve! it is so beautiful and real and simple yet intricate.. ah! i am seriously woozy with joy and admiration....


here is the first one i read that started it all....


If You Forget Me
I want you to know
one thing.

You know how this is:
if I look
at the crystal moon, at the red branch
of the slow autumn at my window,
if I touch
near the fire
the impalpable ash
or the wrinkled body of the log,
everything carries me to you,
as if everything that exists,
aromas, light, metals,
were little boats
that sail
toward those isles of yours that wait for me.

Well, now,
if little by little you stop loving me
I shall stop loving you little by little.

If suddenly
you forget me
do not look for me,
for I shall already have forgotten you.

If you think it long and mad,
the wind of banners
that passes through my life,
and you decide
to leave me at the shore
of the heart where I have roots,
remember
that on that day,
at that hour,
I shall lift my arms
and my roots will set off
to seek another land.

But
if each day,
each hour,
you feel that you are destined for me
with implacable sweetness,
if each day a flower
climbs up to your lips to seek me,
ah my love, ah my own,
in me all that fire is repeated,
in me nothing is extinguished or forgotten,
my love feeds on your love, beloved,
and as long as you live it will be in your arms
without leaving mine.

now i am addicted.. it is wonderful.. i am loving each one more and more. i shall go tomorrow to buy a book of his poetry.. wowo

  • Mood: Tender
  • Reading: Pablo Neruda
  • Eating: PB and flax crackers

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  • Current Residence: Sirako, NY
  • Interests: poetry, painting, charcoal, ink, reading, dreaming, nature
  • Favourite movie: Labyrinth, Pink Floyd The Wall, Eternal Sunshine, What Dreams May Come
  • Favourite band or musician: Violent Femmes, Pink Floyd, Bob Dylan, Janis, The Doors, Joe Driscoll, NIN,
  • Favourite genre of music: old music
  • Favourite artist: Brian Froud, Salvador Dali
  • Favourite poet or writer: Ayn Rand, Kurt Vonnegut
  • Personal Quote: "Our lives are defined by opportunities, even the ones we miss." - Benjamin Button
  • Tools of the Trade: my heart and my words

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:icon3rdeye88:
Thanks for faving my writing "space." If you liked that I have several more. I went to go check out your work but when I saw the shere amount my breain overloaded and broke. :XD: You have quite a lot of writings. Could you perhaps suggest some to me, the cream of the crop, thank you. :D

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Look beyond the world as seen through your two eyes, because that is only two thirds of of the equation.

Patience is a virtue. FUCK PATIENCE LETS DANCE!!

I am so young, but my mind has grown old it seems.

If god is on TV then, I'll listen to the radio
:iconramblinroach:
i do write quite a bit. actually had to separate my writings from my artwork! i guess just read a recent one and tell me what you think... :)

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~ i will write you the longest, most rambling poems ever, the rhythm is never~ending ~
:icon3rdeye88:
WHat's recent though? Oh I guess like one of the ones that are first. Okay will do, I'll also just go ahead and add you to my watch. :D

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Look beyond the world as seen through your two eyes, because that is only two thirds of of the equation.

Patience is a virtue. FUCK PATIENCE LETS DANCE!!

I am so young, but my mind has grown old it seems.

If god is on TV then, I'll listen to the radio
:iconramblinroach:
i understand the brain exploding and breaking! haha.. if i didn't write this much that's what would happen to me!

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~ i will write you the longest, most rambling poems ever, the rhythm is never~ending ~
:iconthralldom:
Thank you for the favourite. Mainly because it brought me here. I love the way that you love poetry. I had a quick browse and I also love what you write. Almost 3 am. Must sleep but you'll be hearing from me again. Thanks.
:iconramblinroach:
thank you! poetry is definitely one of my dearest loves...

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~ i will write you the longest, most rambling poems ever, the rhythm is never~ending ~
:iconelf2tiny:
I have yet to read your more recent poems but I glimpsed at the titles and they really sum up how you felt at the times you wrote them

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~Pam
:icon1axelfan:
thnx for the fav feel free to look through my gallery where there might b somthing else that catches ur eye

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if at first you do not suceed...distroy all evidence that you tried

If you cried when Axel faded, think Demyx has a heart copy and paste this into your signature

:gallery: feel free to look at my gallery [link] :gallery:
:iconramblinroach:
will do

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~ i will write you the longest, most rambling poems ever, the rhythm is never~ending ~
:icon1axelfan:
^^

--
if at first you do not suceed...distroy all evidence that you tried

If you cried when Axel faded, think Demyx has a heart copy and paste this into your signature

:gallery: feel free to look at my gallery [link] :gallery:

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